Together with verbal coffins like model and level in which writers entomb their actors and actions, the English language provides them with a dangerous weapon called nominalization: The writing scholar Helen Sword calls them zombie nouns because they lumber across the scene without a conscious agent directing their motion. We excluded people who failed to understand the instructions. The Passive Voice You can create cannibals with more than just nouns.
Luke Osborn works as an eye doctor specializing in retinal surgery for the new Eye Institute. For a new doctor it is a privilege to be apart of mingling with the ultra-rich whose generous donations created this new facility, but Luke feels that he does not belong.
He has never possessed that much money or lived twitch extravagance.
This new institute is A. MacNeil's dream project as the institute's leader. Naturally at this event, his wife, Agnes as well as his grown daughters, Lucy and Elizabeth astute do.
Strangely the two daughters are very different. Lucy is a lawyer who is dark, slim, drunk, and angry. Contrastly, Elizabeth, a teacher, is fair colored, a little overweight, sober, and pleasant.
One of his first conversations with Lucy had her complaining about eye surgery, "It's not just mistakes that piss me off, it's the coverups. At the party, Luke is offered the position of being the director of clinical research.
He is hesitant with accepting this position since he views himself as a surgeon, not an administrator. As he leaves the party, Luke does have a shock. His vehicle is stripped. Tires, wheels, bumpers, mirrors, and radio are all missing.
How will he get to his home, which is two and a half hours away? Lucy agrees to drive him home. She is somewhat drunk and drives her expensive sports car erratically and way too fast.
They swerve to miss a dog, hit a bump and colliding with a tree. Luke and Lucy looked for whatever caused the bump, but do not find anything. The next day, a woman's body is found. She happens to be a judge's wife.
Since she died of blunt trauma. Since the police were not called, the logical conclusion is than Lucy was likely drunk and is being charged with vehicular manslaughter. Lucy needs Luke to convince the grand jury that she was not intoxicated as she drove to Luke's.
This is how their relationship begins and quickly evolves into the two being married privately by a justice of the peace. Did she marry him for love or to control his testimony? Or is Luke marrying the boss's daughter for his career advancement?
Luke comes from a family where his father was domineering, his mother was passive and he has five siblings. He is a little skeptical in beginning this relationship since his first wife killed herself. However, he allows Lucy to quickly take the lead in their marriage. As a lawyer, Lucy is placed on a case of defending a television evangelist of the Apostolic Church of Christ accused of rape of a minor.
Hower Bain is on video surveillance of being alone with the girl. How can anyone defend him?
Hower is separated from his wife, son, and daughter. He states that this is because of their faith differences.
Could it be that he is unfaithful? This case requires Lucy to travel and to spend much time away from Luke. Lucy does become pregnant and gives birth to Jennifer prematurely, weighing less than three pounds.
With two highly regarded professional careers, they decide to hire a nanny to care for their daughter. However, taking care of Hower Bain seems to be more of a time commitment than a newborn.
He is demanding, rebellious, establishing his own rules that are not helpful, such as against his lawyer's advice, giving a five minute television interview. Or is more going on with her commitment to the case?
Luke has his own challenges.
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Elegant data and ideas deserve elegant expression, argues Helen Sword in this lively guide to academic writing. For scholars frustrated with disciplinary conventions, and for specialists who want to write for a larger audience but are unsure where to begin, here are imaginative, practical, witty.
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Technology's news site of record. Not for dummies. In Stylish Academic Writing (Harvard Uni - versity Press, ), Helen Sword masochistically analyzed the literary style in a sample of schol - arly articles and found that a healthy minority in ev - ery field were written with grace and verve. Instead of moralistic finger-pointing or evasive.